i love you
i love you i. love you i love. you i love. you love me you. love me you love
copy of more like blue
Animation wasnt THAT great, and your idea was completely UNORIGINAL. And its not as a good as More Like Blue - so I'm not compelled by your animation. Infact I cringed. Be more original in future?
All valid points; however, until a new MLB comes out I'm going to continue on with this.
just what i was wating for! but please sort out the voices and repost. because that scene where no one talks is so gay and messes up the plot and hilarity from that poit forth.
I liked it
BUT - and listen to me -
The fact that you shoved subtitles in when they were completely unneccesary spoilt it. Since Im used to watching films with subtitles [my gf is greek], Having subtitles means that you ALWAYS read the subtitles. The problem is that you have timed them so you read the punchline before its happened, which really takes the magic from the momment
This animation is excellent, but consider losing the subtitles! [because all the voices are perfectly audible and understandable, and hence not needed]
I am also not American, so I have an excuse for adding subtitles.
I see your point though, because I listened. I always get distracted by subtitles too, and I fear sometimes it may be too late for me. I'm used to it.
You Stoled This
We all know who Lazy Muffin is. And its deviantart, no devinart. Sheesh.
Seriously. Get. A. Life. and you know you cant upload 'your friends' stuff, it has to be your own
Not impressed overall. Do not think you deserve the score you have - YES IT IS IMPRESSIVE for 2 days - and surely with potential like that you have realised that you can do MUCH BETTER if you spend longer on it
Seriously, go find some audio actors or something - and put in some bits of colour. It would never harm. You definetly have the skill to make MUCH better. Plot wise, yeah its good. animation wise - you seriously need to work harder on it. 2 days obv isnt enough
"Do not think you deserve the score you have"
looool, what'd I do? I did it too fast? AHahah. Guess people vote 5's whenever they like something.
Yes, I'm aware I can do much greater, but with these practices, my greater will be much greater.
I don't wanna mess with coloring or voice acting for these speed anims, they'll slow me down. I value improvement so I will continue these speed anims.
"animation wise - you seriously need to work harder on it"
Reason why I'm practicing.
Anyways, thanks for your support.
Contraversial it seems
Who am i kidding? I love your animations.
For some reason, people are less partial to this exaple of your fine work. It is probably because of the baby at the beginning. The rest of it is pure genius - just like the rest of your works its an nightmare acid trip!
I think people should stop rating it because of content, and more because of style. I enjoy both - im also an artist [non animator though] of this kind of work and i know how difficult it is to sit down and produce this stuff - simply because it has to be original and from your own mind.
Annoying noobs - STOP COMPLAINING. it quite clearly says excessive violence. Goto the ultraviolence collection and have a moan there aswell - atleast that way it will be even!
Good day to you sir.
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